This was another older poem I found that I made a long time ago. 3 - 5 years? Maybe longer. I didn't really make any changes to this one, I like it, and I hope you do as well! It's basically concerning Global Warming, and I think I wrote it after watching a documentary or news channel that was discussing it.Critiques Welcomed!
I'm always looking to improve on my writing, so constructive feedback is always appreciated! Just please keep in mind the difference between criticism and being plain insulting, just stating "it sucks!!!" doesn't really give enough information. Plus, it'll hurt my wittle fweelings~Writing ©
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