Like I mentioned, this is the first time I've written in the horror-theme. I might like to do some more, though tips and advice is greatly appreciated, along with opinions on how I may be able to improve!
I GREATLY encourage everyone to share this, just as long as you're not claiming it as your own and give proper credit! If you do I'd love to see the links of where you've posted it at, and witness firsthand if this story is sending chills down your spines
LOL, step 4 is funny... Welp, guess I'm not sleeping for a few days!
Ok, this was seriously clever. I love how it started out as one of those typical 'how to survive' lists that people write for a laugh. Yeah it was more serious than most but it was still enjoyable to read and very well written. All of the points made were logical and sensible, exactly how you should act in situations like this.
Then I read step four.
I still haven't looked behind me.
So that was a fantastic twist, extremely subtle and well done. I'm not very easily scared so the fact that I am point-blank refusing to turn around tells me that this was a freaking great piece of writing. Utterly amazing, and incredible work for a first time horror. Keep it up mate, for scaring the hell out of me you've got a new watcher
If you did regret terrifying me then you wouldn't be writing horror now would you
You're entirely welcome, this was an utterly fantastic piece. I'm attempting to write my own creepypasta at the moment so it's always fantastic to see new ones pop up, especially when they are so unique like this one. It always helps spark inspiration for me (and tells me to get off my backside and actually do something).
Don't worry about it being slow, the best stuff always comes with time (hence my need to still actually attempt one). And if you can keep creating really original stuff like this then that would be absolutely epic